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Hi Brooke,my name is Leilani and i am 9 years old. This was really interesting to read about because I am a competitive swimmer myself! I like how you describe what the IM is and how you had to verse a Olympic swimmer! Next time maybe you could add some more full stops in or commas instead of using alot of and's. Keep up the good work!
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